The feedback i received the last time that I made an elevator pitch was mostly all positive feedback. Those that commented thought I was focusing a little to much on the actual product and not so much appealing to my customer segment that I was trying to reach. So i attempted to be more casual this time around. I decided to act more casually this time, hopefully not to casual though. I think that this will appeal more to the customer segment that I am trying to reach. All of the things that I should be noticing were true for me as well!