I wanted to focus on more of the delivery of my message during this elevator pitch run. The feedback I got from the previous one I did was all positive, so I decided to approach this one more naturally and casually to see if I could deliver it as I would be talking to a friend. I was surprised that all of my feedback was positive!
I decided that I wanted to change the rigidness of the first pitch and approach this attempt as a more laid back vibe, hopefully which would come off better to listeners.
Nick,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really good job with your second pitch. I think some things that you could have done differently was positioning the camera differently so that you can see your full body and hand movements so people can see you getting your point across to them. I also think that it could have been better if you showed more enthusiasm.
Hey Nick,
ReplyDeleteI think the easiest change you can make is to remove some of the introduction portions from your pitch to streamline into the product faster. I know for me that was a problem with my first pitch. It would also help to be more specific about the details of your venture in order to better visualize what it is you are pitching.