The feedback i received the last time that I made an elevator pitch was mostly all positive feedback. Those that commented thought I was focusing a little to much on the actual product and not so much appealing to my customer segment that I was trying to reach. So i attempted to be more casual this time around.
I decided to act more casually this time, hopefully not to casual though. I think that this will appeal more to the customer segment that I am trying to reach. All of the things that I should be noticing were true for me as well!
Nick,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job on your third pitch. One thing that I would recommend is that you use more hand motion and stop just moving back and forth. I think it makes you look like you are almost nervous and don't think it would look well towards your audience. You started to use hand motions at the end but think you could use more.